What+you+like+and+or+dislike+about+your+novel

The things I like about the book, "Tribes, is that after the first five chapters it was very hard to put down the book. I believe that it was made in the high school time which all of us are in now, so it was very easy to connect and or relate to it. The romance between Elissa and Percy just made things way more interesting. They were the reason why lots of nights I was reading ahead. I also like how lots of things related to his supposedly dead dad. It made you feel a sense of pity and emotional attachment to Percy's character. The twist at the end was extremely unexpected and that's why I liked it. The whole time you believed he was dead and why were all the counsellors like Mr verplaz not getting where this boy is coming from? It all unravells in the end and really clears all the holes in the book right up.

Some things I didn't like about the book is the way they had to go into the epilogue to explain what really happened between Percy and Elissa. Those are the two main characters of the book and they left them unanswered. As well as i would of changed the ending to Percy and Elissa going to grad together. Give the audience a sense of peace and something to thrive off of. It seemed like he went to grad and they didn't converse on word, just looked awkwardly at each other. I didn't like it and would of done changing to only that part. Also I believe that Percy's mother should have got a name. I believe that in any book every character should have a name especially a character like his mother.